NARRATIVE WRITING

Purpose: You will write a story that will entertain your audience i.e the whole world.

Today’s WALT: entice the audience to read more and to understand who is the main character.

SC:

1. Hook in your audience with suspense, humour, traditional fairytale starter, rhetorical question or a general description of the setting and characters.

2. Try to include some historical background (exposition) about your main character.

3. Choose a point of view - First Character or Third Character

4. View the Youtube videos before you start writing.

5. Use my narrative Plan, to help me stay on the main idea.

The Chocolate Factory.

Once upon a time, exactly 30 years ago, there lived a King, Queen, Prince called Journey and their two servants, Tipi and Jose. They all lived in a giant palace.

One day the King and Queen, discovered they had no food in the palace and they were hungry. So the King sent Jose and Tipi out to look for some food. Jose and Tipi looked for food for hours and they still found nothing, until Tipi tripped into the bush and he found a chocolate factory. Tipi and Jose decided not to share their knowledge to the King and Queen about the chocolate factory, so they put the bush back up so no one could see it.

Not long after that they returned back to the palace and to tell the King and Queen, that they did not find anything.

So the King and Queen sent Prince Journey on a quest to look for food.

Prince Journey looked and looked, he did not find any thing until he decided that he had had enough of searching. So Prince Journey turned his horse around and headed back to the palace. Then he spotted a tiny speak of shininess through a bush, that caught his eye. He peered through the bush and saw the chocolate factory. He jumped back onto his horse and rode as fast as he could back to the palace to tell the King and Queen.

When he got back to the palace at mid-night, Prince Journey ran straight to the King and Queen’s bedroom. However as he was running up the stairs a net was thrown towards him and instantly he became tangled and Prince Journey fell to the ground.  Poor Prince Journey had fallen into Jose and Tipi’s trap.

Tipi and Jose quickly gather Prince Journey and threw him into the dungeon. The King and Queen did not know about the danger their son was in or the knowledge about the chocolate factory. As they were still asleep in their royal bed.

The next morning Jose and Tipi left the palace to go and live at the chocolate factory, without telling their royal bosses. When the king and queen woke, they were confused as they hear screaming down in the dungeon and they hadn’t had a prisoner there for ages.

The King goes down to see who it is and he discovered his son Prince Journey locked up in chains.

When Prince Journey was rescued by his Dad, he told his parents, the King and Queen, about the chocolate factory.

So the King, Queen, Prince Journey and a few loyal guards headed out to the chocolate factory. It took them hour to reach their final destination.

When they arrived at the chocolate factory they saw Jose and Tipi pigging out on the chocolate. The King was very angry when he saw his two ex-servant pigging out on the chocolate so he booted them out of the kingdom and they were never to be seen again.

So in the end, Prince Journey, the King and the Queen all lived happily ever after in the chocolate factory... and Tipi and Jose did not live happily ever after as they never shared anything with anyone so no-one ever talked to them or helped them.

THE END